When the Coconut finally came into my hands,
I thought the same thoughts as all who held it before me:
that it and I are in fact twins in our imprisonment,
here alone in a silent shell,
and that our inability to be known
is broken only by a rare somebodys rarer desire
to actually feel what lies inside.
Misunderstood is the cry of the crowd,
and a listening ear, and an eye aware
are the medicines long ignored.
Only figures like the Coconut,
growing on its dreamy Caribbean trees far away,
appeal to my desire of connection,
and those right with me in the dismal cold,
crying out dying for another to taste their sweet within,
seem to amount only to the percussive flick
of another soul dancing lightly along my shell.














Comments
not advanced critique, but its awesome how you can take an event and create an abstract writing from it.
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Words are flowing out like endless rain into a paper cup
They slither while they pass
they slip away across the universe
hahah and yeah...it turned out my thoughts kepppt coming back to it for the rest of the day and finally I decided this would be the best course to take
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Give me life. Give me pain.
Give me my
Self again.
I'm addressing you. Are you going to let your emotional life be run by Time Magazine?
and i like the analogy very much.... i'm not sure why... it seems rather obvious.
but i think it's that a coconut is usually not taken seriously its self... it's not cocoa... sure as hell isn't a nut... it's only purpose is to fall on people's heads on Gilligan's island...
i like the repitition of "rare" in
"and that our inability to be known
is broken only by a rare somebodys rarer desire
to actually feel what lies inside. "
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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...
Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik
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Give me life. Give me pain.
Give me my
Self again.
I'm addressing you. Are you going to let your emotional life be run by Time Magazine?
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Well, make no mistakes, or switch off my channel/Armani rips when I fly off the handle.
I got two turntables and a microphone.
I am the High-Wizard-of-Things-That-Go-Bump-in-the-Night
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